LO3:Evaluation of the script

Evaluation

Our script has successfully met the requirements of the brief through producing a 5- 10 minute script for a new local community radio show for Sheffield Live! It was successful through also ensuring it included;

Presenters/ voice actors

News bulletin

Feature/ interview/ narrative 

Jingle/ theme music 

Bedding music/ sound/ effects

Original advert

Competition/ social media links

Some strengths our client gave back to us on our script was how the presenters turn taking was not too long or too short as having long dialogue without a different presenter/ break being in between would bore and put listeners off the show. Also, our dialogue was said by the client to be very casual, friendly and suited to the target audience, which was a strength because it made the show more relatable for our audience.

Client feedback on improvement to our script included improvements such as making it more realistic with its funding through giveaways being smaller and cheaper as the company will not be able to afford a large giveaway. Also, our script did not straight away introduce the presenters as it should, which is why this was an improvement form our client feedback. This is to ensure our listeners are familiar and know who is who.

To change the script giveaway into something capable for the radio company to afford we changed it from a money giveaway to vouchers at a local Sheffield diner. Also, we included our names at the beginning to introduce us to ensure our listeners are not confused.